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Womans Beach by Tank50us Womans Beach by Tank50us
"Are those steaks done yet?!" Tusami asks as Kaida sprinkles more seasoning on them.
"Be patient Tus, A well cooked steak takes time" Sienna says before taking a sip of her soda.
"Says the one with three kids, I'm starved." Tusami quips as she sets her smoothie down.
Kaida takes a whiff of the steaks, and after a second, she says "About five more minutes"
"You said that ten minutes ago" Tusami protests.

Sienna, Kiada, and Tusami are at a resort known as the "Venus Hotel, Spa, and Resort", it is a woman's only resort for female hybrids who are mothers, or just have stressful jobs, and need a place to unwind without worrying about guys gawking at them. For that reason, the whole complex is on an island with a dock for small sea planes. It is NOT cheap however, but anyone that goes there becomes a life member, and can return at any time, and only pay the cost of fuel and food.

This pic spawned out of a discussion on Livestreme between me and :iconcaninehybrid:, and after a short talk, I got to drawing this pic. And after about four days of work... I have to say... this pic came out well imho, and I'm very pleased with the results.

Tusami and Kaida Copyright :iconcaninehybrid:
Artwork and Sienna Kerrigan copyright myself.
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As always when I make a Critique. I will look at the Image, and there is quite something to look at en?. (Hue Hue Hue) Rate, then give my comments on each section I rated.

[Pre-Rating]
Okay I have looked at it and I will start with a little side note that every one has seen by now ... BOOBS. There I said it. Well really to be kind there are three ladies (Hermm seems I am being quite respectful in calling them ladies and now women...anyway!) sitting on the beach of there Island enjoying there time away from the world that seems to be disconnected from this spot and that might be a good thing or a bad thing aside from what is conesrn from the most part. Hay if I understand what I said half the time..wait I am writing so I do! Anyway. That Charazard. (Might have spelled that wrong :| ) What a beautiful image of mothers enjoying some time away from there lifes, clearly they are in a relaxed state that is hard to get elsewhere. Not My image/Vision here is slightly burry but I have a feeling that is because of the setting and brush used. I am guessing you where going for a ocean sweep look with a myst. But I am amusing again. On that note, the Originality of this image thou used before, with humans, is still quite nice to look at because it tells a story that words can't quite explain. The look on there face, the seen in the back the over all feel is very relaxing and inviting. (Wish I could be there.) But moving on the time it must have taking to get this and the fact every time I see your drawings it makes my mind just want to write! (Well you got me here, thats a start xD) So this is a very fine and clearly getting better Technique. As for the overall statement/Impact, do I really have to say it again. This Image clearly tells you whats going on there is no need to guess what is going on and hell we have food and soda. We is cool now bro/sis!

[Intermission]
Well that was the Pre-rating. Now I rate the image based on what I see and what I said. THis is done from my view standing so others might have there own view on this and I say let them speak there mind but your reading this so you are clearly engaged in my view or want to know what I am thinking about it. Also, Peanuts. Because you are reading this far might as well give you something random! Now back to the Critique.

[Rating]
Vision: I give you a 4 and a half out of 5 because of the fact in the back round I feel that there is something obscuring the view. Call me bad but even that throws me off a little. But that is not the main view point. We are looking at the Ladies and I can see them clear as day. The Sand and other objects all look clear as well. I can tell what everything is and not have to second guess when I look. (Save for the clouds because of the Ocean spray/filter.)

Originality: I give you a 5 out of 5. Because in this I have to say it is you and always you. Your drawings have always been like ventage eye candy that pleases me to no end. Just looking at this one I want to keep it to look at. But I have it here to look at as well! The down side, because there always is one to everything in life, is the fact that well it has that pop (Amazing what shadow detailing will do.) The dragoness on the left. her hand is a little I want to say goofed but then again I know hands are one of the hardest things to draw. So I did not mark you down for it.

Technique: I give you a 5 out of 5. This is quite the work of art and you have always given us something to view and see with such shock and aw. This is no different. And it looks as if your always improving your self thus making your art better. I might not know much about drawing, (Writing was always my thing which I should get back into. I have a story coming soon to DA XD Shameless self plug, anyway back to this!) But I can say if you make a choice to do this for a living you have a good chance to go far. Never stop improving your self and always remember, you can always do even better as your get better!

Impact: I give you a 5 out of 5. Thus something I have nothing to really say because well there is nothing that needs to be said as you can just understand. THey are relaxing at a resort. On the beach getting ready to eat. This just explains its self with no furthermore needed input.

[Conclusion]
Brace your selfs because this is going to take everything we have ready on three...one...two...three! "THIS IS AMAZING!" Good. That took a lot of breath away from us all who pitched in. Anyway, this image is clearly defined and refined as it looks so much nicer and cleaner. Why I say that because all his work has always been nice and clean(even the dirty stuff ). To me the fact it has such address to detail and shadow detailing it really makes me wish I could draw just to be half as good as his is. Now before I sign off with this Critique let me say. To the artest himself. Keep up the good work and always enjoy your self while you make this art because if you enjoy it. Your followers/fans will enjoy it as well. We all know true art comes from the heart and soul. And this is where I believe he draws from when he gets himself into it. Now if you excuse me I am going to see if I can sneek onto that Island! Hope you enjoyed reading this because I enjoyed writing it.

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Hi there! You mentioned you'd appreciate a critique, so I hope this helps! ^^

The piece really catches my eye because I've never actually seen anything quite like it - the idea is really cool and original, and your description is great in lending more info to where they are, why they may be there, etc. Your technique is also really nice! I love /all/ of the details you got in there, from their facial expressions to the various items scattered about - I salute you in all the details and items, they are really well done and really add realism to the piece. I can almost hear their voices as they try to decide whether to swim or sunbathe some more!

Your anatomy is really nice, too, and the mix of human-dragon anatomy is flawless, seriously. Kaida is especially really well done - her pose is really nice and her proportions are also perfect. The other two are really nicely done as well, though there are some mainly proportional points.

For example, Tusami's neck and forearms seem just a bit too short. She is clearly tucking her chin, showing her irritation, but her neck muscles would bulge out more to the neck and sides and we'd see this more. Her upper-body also seems larger than her lower body, especially with how thin her thigh is and how her hips just kind of go straight into her tail. Of course, this is a difficult pose and would just take practice.

Sienna is also well-done, and I really like how you did her clothing details, like her skirt and pull-over being clear - the colours work really nicely! Her upper-body is really well done, but then from about her belly-button down her lower body is very flat compared to the rest of her! Her thighs are quite thin - I think it'd help if you'd put a bit more curve in there where the muscles would be, especially along the back of the bent leg. I also wouldn't make her feet pointed so straight - usually people's feet are bent up a little when they're relaxing - the pointed toes have more of a dancing feel. Ah, and I just realized...does she have a tail? Or is it curled behind her? If she does have a tail, I'd definitely show it, since how she's sitting, it will flow straight down from her spine.

And just a couple other technical things, your shading is really nice! However, since they're at the beach, you could try bringing in more golds and blues from the sun and sand. Unless, of course, it's a cloudy day. ^^ Your light source is really nice and defined too, and I love how you shaded Kaida's wings! And speaking of wings, Tusami and Sienna's wings are pretty flat-looking. For example, with Sienna's foremost wing, there are some highlights along the edge, then really deep shading around the tips of the wing fingers. Instead of putting such heavy shading on each finger, it'd be more realistic if some of the longer fingers overlap and hide the short fingers, and also if you tried a kind of 'tiered' shading, with darker shading on the lower wing finger sections, and then highlights on the edge and knuckles of the uppermost fingers. (I hope I'm explaining that clearly enough. XD Kind of like here: [link] Where the shading isn't really dark, but defines where the front of the wing is hitting the light more than other areas.)

Background-wise, I don't have much to say - the ocean and boats are really nice and you blurred them just right not to take the focus off the characters. I'd also blur the sand dune behind them, and maybe actually remove that so you can show off the ocean more. Right now it appears as though they're in a little cove, which is kinda cool, but I think on vacation they'd like a nice view of the waves. ^^

Hope that helps! :D Keep up the sweet work!
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OrisuKato Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
ooohhhhh, pretty ^^ and i love the story behind it ^^
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little-owlette Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Eeee, this is such a beautiful illustration! You have a fantastic handle on anatomy! I especially love the girl in the middle. :3
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DragonicShadow Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cool.
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Bellumsaur Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow! I love this!
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katSuntzu Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
I started to think oh no she's going to burn her tail then I quickly realized that I was an idiot.
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drakeErternal Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
I love it!
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Insane-Randomness Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Here's my critic: mmmm
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Dell-AD-productions Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice
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Graeth-Raltharn Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
yowzah
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Jaeger15 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Very nice. I love how the charizard hybrid's cooking with her tail, very ingenious.
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