"Are those steaks done yet?!" Tusami asks as Kaida sprinkles more seasoning on them. "Be patient Tus, A well cooked steak takes time" Sienna says before taking a sip of her soda. "Says the one with three kids, I'm starved." Tusami quips as she sets her smoothie down. Kaida takes a whiff of the steaks, and after a second, she says "About five more minutes" "You said that ten minutes ago" Tusami protests.
Sienna, Kiada, and Tusami are at a resort known as the "Venus Hotel, Spa, and Resort", it is a woman's only resort for female hybrids who are mothers, or just have stressful jobs, and need a place to unwind without worrying about guys gawking at them. For that reason, the whole complex is on an island with a dock for small sea planes. It is NOT cheap however, but anyone that goes there becomes a life member, and can return at any time, and only pay the cost of fuel and food.
This pic spawned out of a discussion on Livestreme between me and , and after a short talk, I got to drawing this pic. And after about four days of work... I have to say... this pic came out well imho, and I'm very pleased with the results.
Tusami and Kaida Copyright Artwork and Sienna Kerrigan copyright myself.
As a start, you have a good grasp on anatomy (which I find commendable in many cases these days). Your poses are interesting, and are not static. Your wings bent in a believable manner, and do not seem to hinder the positions of your characters. The weakest point of your anatomy, I think, is your hands and wrists. To me, the hands seem a bit small, particularly on Kaida, and the wrists, a bit thin. In the case of Tusami, the grounded hand seems to run right into the arm, with minimal wrist at all. Now, they aren't badly done, but I think there is still some room for improvement.
Your coloring and lighting are very well done, and you have an interesting palette, which serves the idea of a beach scene well. The positioning of the objects throughout the scene help with the theme, without appearing as random clutter. Your background has nice depth. However, your sand dunes seem somewhat flat. If you look at pictures of sand dunes, the shadows can be very dark and abrupt. As deep as the shadows on your characters are, and given the height of the middle dune, I think you could have added a bit of a harder shadow from along the top edges, to give it that nice crisp feel. Still, these are just some tips for future reference. You do have the elements for a wonderful piece here, as is.
First of all, the composition is quite well done, my eye is drawn directly to the figure in the middle. and the sand hill behind them keeps the eye rotating throughout the picture. Colors and shading are also exceptionally good. Although, I'd work more on the shadows upon the sand and the sand texture itself. I feel as if you might have gotten lazy on the background. It is obvious you used a repeating canvas type pattern, which makes the sand hills look two dimensional against the characters. Everything else, the luggage, items, and characters all pop out in their own uniformity. Again, great composition, the placing of the blue luggage in the corner keeps my eye from wandering off the page, even the blue shadow to the left corner keeps the viewer within the boundaries of the main piece, and the blue from each of these corners creates a uniformity of color around the center. The more neutral colored characters being placed at either side of the brightest character further define this area. You do a magnificent job with the transparency of the brown character and the way the skin shines makes it seem as if their skin is somewhat slick. Unfortunately I cannot quite tell the mood of the weather. The lightsource seems to be radiating from the top right of the picture on a cloudy day. If the picture was to be depicted in a more joyous mood, a more sunnier day might have done the trick, but perhaps you did this to accomidate for the white highlights of the characters. Like the background the fire of the main characters tail seems a little fake in comparison to the rest. It's cartoonish 2d style clashes a bit with the main characters but oddly enough might work with the also very cartoonish background.
As a start, you have a good grasp on anatomy (which I find commendable in many cases these days). Your poses are interesting, and are not static. Your wings bent in a believable manner, and do not seem to hinder the positions of your characters. The weakest point of your anatomy, I think, is your hands and wrists. To me, the hands seem a bit small, particularly on Kaida, and the wrists, a bit thin. In the case of Tusami, the grounded hand seems to run right into the arm, with minimal wrist at all. Now, they aren't badly done, but I think there is still some room for improvement.
Your coloring and lighting are very well done, and you have an interesting palette, which serves the idea of a beach scene well. The positioning of the objects throughout the scene help with the theme, without appearing as random clutter. Your background has nice depth. However, your sand dunes seem somewhat flat. If you look at pictures of sand dunes, the shadows can be very dark and abrupt. As deep as the shadows on your characters are, and given the height of the middle dune, I think you could have added a bit of a harder shadow from along the top edges, to give it that nice crisp feel. Still, these are just some tips for future reference. You do have the elements for a wonderful piece here, as is.
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